Topic: For all that have loved and lost.
wanderingsoul's photo
Mon 04/09/07 11:16 PM
I stand alone on a distant clif lisening to your voice on the wind.
I look to the seting sun only to see your face, a thought of what was
befor the fall.
A tear falls to join the salty waves below.
I let the clif fall away, a thought only for a moment..of what was what
could have been (love and life after it)but not for me.
As I crash beneath the waves and fall to the ocan floor my hart beat
stops my breath on more, so this is what is ment for me forever lost to
the sea.



please do not mind any spelling that is not right. And thank you for
reading.

Thndrghost's photo
Mon 04/09/07 11:44 PM
Very nice...I can relate to it :cry: flowerforyou

wanderingsoul's photo
Tue 04/10/07 12:16 AM
thank you.
I hope others can to:smile:

LAMom's photo
Tue 04/10/07 12:51 AM
Really nice flowerforyou :cry:

karmafury's photo
Tue 04/10/07 01:08 AM
Very nice, well written (despite spelling)

prussia's photo
Tue 04/10/07 03:45 AM
I was always wondering Why is that a sea or an Ocean or basicaly any
water bodies are choosen as a places for sorrow and tears? Just look in
all World literature. What kind of magnetis water has over our minds?

Though sometimes Mountains are choosen for the same emotional relief
.... Nature?


It was written with passion. Thanks for sharing
:^)

wanderingsoul's photo
Tue 04/10/07 10:12 PM
most wellcome. and to anser the question it is becouse it is deep and
dark and full of all things from the mind and soul that cant be seen,
only felt.

no photo
Wed 04/11/07 07:47 AM
Head or Heart


There is no connection
Between my head and my fingers.
While my heart was happy
It shouted out loud
And fingers flew over the keyboard,
Producing verses of happiness.
Now that my heart is broken
My head rules
And my fingers are mute
Things that were important before
Don’t seem to matter anymore.

bibby7's photo
Wed 04/11/07 10:13 AM












The Sailing
by Bobby7

I sail on; upon this endless sea, with no one here to comfort me
I sail on; my body slaves, to conquer these forbidding waves
I sail on; to places I must find , to free my tired and tortured mind
I sail on; to that elusive goal, in hope to cleanse my troubled soul..

I sail on; the sea's become my home, it seems to sense that I'm alone
I sail on; to where my heart can thrive, and remind me that I'm still
alive
I sail on; ships pass me in the night.I can't be seen, I run no light
I sail on; and see the rising sun, and know my journey's almost done

I sail on; and as the storm clouds part, I find the harbour of your
heart
I sail no more! My sailing's done!..And you and I are now as one!

wanderingsoul's photo
Fri 04/13/07 01:28 AM
thank all that have looked at my poem and I hope you take something from
it.

be well and be safe.