Topic: swimming
jimz's photo
Thu 11/20/08 10:40 AM
Edited by jimz on Thu 11/20/08 10:41 AM
sommersaults
deep knee bends
push up
heavy weight
but it must
come
down

push in
push in

through
the web

through
the maze

im swim
ming
yet
my str
okes
are hea
vy

my
burdens
waves

solder
ed
soldiers
hoping to
grow wings
but nothing
grows but dreams

many
reps
even
those
hol
low
mom
ents

yet
the
less
you
do
the
better
you can
do with
what the
pelican
brings
by the
cliffs
by the
sea

jump
in

un
solder

me

PDA's photo
Fri 11/21/08 02:21 AM
Well, that was a bit different, good, but very different set-up of the piece..

Thanks for sharing.

~PDA~

LAMom's photo
Fri 11/21/08 10:22 AM
:heart: Jimmy

Fadedspirit's photo
Fri 11/21/08 10:42 PM
Nice write jimz. :smile: drinker

no photo
Sat 11/22/08 06:53 PM
...pushing through the maze and smiling on the other sidebigsmile :banana: :banana: