Topic: Broken
Sky_Rail's photo
Sat 12/20/08 10:59 PM
Edited by Sky_Rail on Sat 12/20/08 11:00 PM
Broken



Broken hearts or broken minds

Naked bodies limbs entwined

Seething emotions ebb and flow

Tides of trust come and go

Listless dreams and hopes ensue

Promises broken nothings true

swelling hearts and heaving breast

passionate moans faked at best

Spirits soar when white lies are spread

Truths then surface from beneath the dead

No longer loved cramped and cold

Anguish flares when the facts are told

No love was ever mine to hold

Just an illusion so I'm told

Alone I lay as does my kind

Broken hearts and twisted minds.


Sky




rochelle1263's photo
Sat 12/20/08 11:05 PM
very good read thanx for sharing

imsingle951's photo
Sun 12/21/08 05:15 AM
Good work

Mysticwriter612's photo
Sun 12/21/08 11:46 AM
I really like the word choices you have here. You have a nack for writing poetry. I really liked this, thanks for sharing =)

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Sun 12/21/08 05:33 PM
So true on many many levels.flowers

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Sun 12/21/08 06:17 PM
very nice, thanks for posting and welcomeflowerforyou flowerforyou