Topic: We Danced
lilwick86's photo
Sat 01/03/09 08:27 PM
You gave her your heart
that was to start
you gave her a ring
it wringed my neck
you gave her more attention
than you ever gave me
now I have no intentions left
to move on.

I'll stay home again
on our anniversary
and I will get dressed
and I will dance
in the kitchen
look longingly at your picture
and I will wrap my self
in a blanket of memories
and hold myself
as I cry myself to sleep
again,

and tomorrow,

I will do it again
until it doesn't hurt so much to breath
or to seethe
as if I really wanted to hurt anyone
like you hurt me
or like someone else did long ago,
all I wanted
was for you to let me love you,
and you to love me
I should have known
there was no love in you for me
eyes were always set for another,
even after you took me
you still knew
you were in love with her,
and I can't keep dancing forever
a forbidden dance
because your love
danced with mine
only because
she did not yet dance with you.

eastcoastpoet's photo
Sat 01/03/09 08:29 PM
that's great!

lilwick86's photo
Sat 01/03/09 08:38 PM

that's great!

Thank you very much, smileshappy

no photo
Sat 01/03/09 08:40 PM
flowerforyou :heart: Very nice...:heart:

lilwick86's photo
Sat 01/03/09 08:45 PM

flowerforyou :heart: Very nice...:heart:

OH thank you so much. smiles flowerforyou happy

no photo
Sat 01/03/09 08:53 PM
Sad that so many wind up in this situation. A very touching piece. The two lines,

"I will wrap my self
in a blanket of memories"

Wow, two great lines. Very nice piece.

lilwick86's photo
Sat 01/03/09 08:55 PM

Sad that so many wind up in this situation. A very touching piece. The two lines,

"I will wrap my self
in a blanket of memories"

Wow, two great lines. Very nice piece.


Munchos Gracious, your comments are great too.
I like that line too, its one of my favorite ones.

no photo
Sat 01/03/09 09:57 PM
just simply wonderfulflowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sun 01/04/09 02:28 PM
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