Topic: Dream In Twilight
Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 04/29/09 01:10 AM
Dream In Twilight

In twilight I dream
Somewhere in time
Something here is missing
Yet something felt not right.

A tearing of my spirit
So faithful in it's hold,
Painfully aware,
Unrelenting and so cold.

Caught between the borders
Confusion spilled amiss
Comming round so slowly
A death within a wish.

Visions maybe memories
Voices, twisted words
Scratchy records play
Memories out of verse.

Shadows dancing rampant
Fog begins to sway...
Eerie shapes disturbing
What light was here to stay.

Squeezed into submission
A fight is worth what's lost,
To the spoils go the victor
Summing up the cost.

Twilight dreams of madness
Caught within a hold
Plaguing dreams of grandeur
Painted my fool's gold.

Conforming to confusion
Pretend to right what's wrong
Awaking out of anger
And again a life moves on.

Fadedspirit 4/29/2009

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Wed 04/29/09 04:14 AM
Perfection! As always....flowers flowers flowers flowers flowers

LAMom's photo
Wed 04/29/09 09:52 AM
Ohhhhhhhhh I so miss you


flowers flowers flowers flowers

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 04/30/09 08:44 AM
Bleed for me
O’Shaughnessy
While merry
Shines the night.

With each inhale
May darkness pale
His gloom
Replaced with light.

As thoughts of mine
Cross darkened skies
Quiet as owl’s wing.

Hunting hound
Up off the ground
Good fortune may you bring.

As above, so below,
Following paths of natural flow,
Blessings sung of new found spring.


Morn'in Faded! This was runnin through Friday afternoon. The endings not quite right, so if something speaks louder to you feel free to change it.

AngelLight's photo
Thu 04/30/09 09:12 AM

Dream In Twilight

In twilight I dream
Somewhere in time
Something here is missing
Yet something felt not right.

A tearing of my spirit
So faithful in it's hold,
Painfully aware,
Unrelenting and so cold.

Caught between the borders
Confusion spilled amiss
Comming round so slowly
A death within a wish.

Visions maybe memories
Voices, twisted words
Scratchy records play
Memories out of verse.

Shadows dancing rampant
Fog begins to sway...
Eerie shapes disturbing
What light was here to stay.

Squeezed into submission
A fight is worth what's lost,
To the spoils go the victor
Summing up the cost.

Twilight dreams of madness
Caught within a hold
Plaguing dreams of grandeur
Painted my fool's gold.

Conforming to confusion
Pretend to right what's wrong
Awaking out of anger
And again a life moves on.

Fadedspirit 4/29/2009



Very nice flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Fri 05/01/09 09:15 AM
AngelLight provided (well jeepers) the light! May her cricket song surround all she touches. Thank-you, Angel!

Bleed for me
O’Shaughnessy
While merry
Shines the night.

With each inhale
May darkness pale
His gloom
Replaced with light.

As thoughts of mine
Cross darkened skies
Quiet as owl’s wing.

Hunting hound
Leaps from the ground
While the crickets sing.

As above, so below,
Follow you your natural flow.
Lessons new,
like morning dew
quench thy thirsting soul.

Come to drink
Heart on the brink
of another's fray.

With dawning skies,
The fog shall rise
Ushering in the way.

Fadedspirit's photo
Wed 05/13/09 08:04 PM
Aww, thanks MisKim. That's sweet to say. I'm glad you liked it. flowers happy

Aww, Thanks (((LAMom))). I've been away too long.

Very nice DKW, sorry I was late to read that one. AngelLight is always helpful, even when sometimes she doesn't know it. hee hee flowers

Thanks AngelLight. happy flowers