Topic: ~Opened Eyes~
EternalKaos's photo
Thu 05/21/09 06:29 PM
Without any meaning, the days flow by.
Without any reason, I give a sigh.

Now then, there is one that brings light to my world.
Over a great barrier, It seems I was then hurled.

Within the dark corner, I have been throughout the year.
But she has shown me the light that i now need not fear.

As I gaze upon my savior, my heart sighs of pain.
The beauty of she, drives my mind insane.

Eyes as pure as a cloudless sky.
My heart beats ever faster as she passes by.

Feelings deep inside myself, feelings unknown.
As my attention pulls towards her, and her alone.

What's different about today, I do not know,
But away from her, I will not go.

Forever by her side, I wish to stay.
And yet, I will eternally rejoice if it is just for today.

____________________________________~Vincent Night~_
It might be just me but this one felt like it didnt have as much depth as my others. but still tnx for reading and pleas tell me what u think ~♥~

nvkikigirl's photo
Fri 05/29/09 12:29 AM
I think this is beautiful. Nicely done!!


My fave is the ending.

"Forever by her side, I wish to stay.
And yet, I will eternally rejoice if it is just for today."

To have that one moment....beautiful!!!




JosefQuewl's photo
Fri 05/29/09 03:23 AM
Very good!