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      Change me, rearrange me
 The pieces that make me Bobby Can also be reconfigured to make superman if you let them If I let you let them I'm am simple yet complex Neglect me and I will still grow Love me and you will make me whole Even though you know that I know you know the truth My imperfections are what make me perfect Perfection is for the naive ones Superman or supermen, we are but all human Divinity I am, if I am part of god The whole truth and nothing but the truth is a lie Look at me and tell me to my face eye to eye Who cares if you're scared I am too..... You keep telling me think outside the box Understand that I live in a four cornered room Four corners that all this time forever consume That which is not me in a rounded world This is just a ramble of thoughts Nothing in particular just multiple plots To clear my mind and relinquish me from reality Because really....does anyone care anymore? | |
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      I must be see through today. Very heart felt.
 Thank You for sharing.   | |
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|    Very nice..well done     | |
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      did u write that poem? it's very good    | |
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      Really nice jump...you've got some good writes goin' on...     I love your statement about imperfections making you "perfect" and about being both human and divine.....beautifully stated. | |
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      Thanks everyone for your comments...All of these are originals and written by me. I just come to work and sit and write. I actually wrote this one in 10 mins.  I have a nack for it I guess...."Write" on people "write" on  (pun intended)
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| Change me, rearrange me The pieces that make me Bobby Can also be reconfigured to make superman if you let them If I let you let them I'm am simple yet complex Neglect me and I will still grow Love me and you will make me whole Even though you know that I know you know the truth My imperfections are what make me perfect Perfection is for the naive ones Superman or supermen, we are but all human Divinity I am, if I am part of god The whole truth and nothing but the truth is a lie Look at me and tell me to my face eye to eye Who cares if you're scared I am too..... You keep telling me think outside the box Understand that I live in a four cornered room Four corners that all this time forever consume That which is not me in a rounded world This is just a ramble of thoughts Nothing in particular just multiple plots To clear my mind and relinquish me from reality Because really....does anyone care anymore? Good piece. I have to say I am perfectly imperfect myself   | |
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| Change me, rearrange me 
 The pieces that make me Bobby Can also be reconfigured to make superman if you let them   | |
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      to be known and understood, "as is",,,,,seems a universal need. I like your write bobby    | |
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| The whole truth and nothing but the truth is a lie Look at me and tell me to my face eye to eye Who cares if you're scared I am too..... I really feel that. People are made to be afraid and most of us need to embrace it more. | |
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| Change me, rearrange me The pieces that make me Bobby Can also be reconfigured to make superman if you let them If I let you let them I'm am simple yet complex Neglect me and I will still grow Love me and you will make me whole Even though you know that I know you know the truth My imperfections are what make me perfect Perfection is for the naive ones Superman or supermen, we are but all human Divinity I am, if I am part of god The whole truth and nothing but the truth is a lie Look at me and tell me to my face eye to eye Who cares if you're scared I am too..... You keep telling me think outside the box Understand that I live in a four cornered room Four corners that all this time forever consume That which is not me in a rounded world This is just a ramble of thoughts Nothing in particular just multiple plots To clear my mind and relinquish me from reality Because really....does anyone care anymore? | |
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