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Alive yet not living, I drown in a sea of loathing and peril, waiting on the answer but I have yet to ask the question,Scorned by love and tainted by life, I sit in the shadows and wait for the light.
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Alive yet not living, I drown in a sea of loathing and peril, waiting on the answer but I have yet to ask the question,Scorned by love and tainted by life, I sit in the shadows and wait for the light. (((((  )))))  
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I know it's not very good I was stoned when I wrote it.
 
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Actually, it's very reflective, which in my opinion, is pretty damned good. I also suspect the depth is truly there without the "stoning" prerequisite. Try it and see how it goes, when you're ready of course.
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Thanx
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Thanx |
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That was nice
Were you really stoned when you wrote it?  I guess you just have that gift 
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Thanx
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Actually, it's very reflective, which in my opinion, is pretty damned good. I also suspect the depth is truly there without the "stoning" prerequisite. Try it and see how it goes, when you're ready of course. Very precise, to the point. I agree try it not stoned,a well written poem of your own makes you high in spirit.
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GinGin,
If getting stoned gets yer creative juices flowin', then keep doin' what yer doin'... It's obviously working. I suggest you smoke twice as much and see how creative you get then....! And now, drugged treefrogs in space...! 
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