Topic: Unhidden
Fadedspirit's photo
Tue 06/16/09 01:50 AM
Unhidden

You are the night that surrounds me
When I am alone
The whispers that beckon
Speak from the pillow I hold.

You are the heartbeat
Sustaining my life
The water to quench
A thirst that won't dry.

Perhaps you're the tune
That plays fond in my mind
Or a smile that shines
To brighten my night.

You are the one
Whom touches my soul
Kissing my pain
With the love you well show.

I'm only worthy to lie at your feet
Yet gently you urge
These strange feelings in me.

To grant you a wish
If only I could
With heartfelt emotion
You know that I would.

To hold you eternal
I'd give you my soul
To love you forever
This, dear, is my goal.

Fadedspirit 6/16/2009

vivian2981's photo
Tue 06/16/09 05:31 AM

Unhidden

You are the night that surrounds me
When I am alone
The whispers that beckon
Speak from the pillow I hold.

You are the heartbeat
Sustaining my life
The water to quench
A thirst that won't dry.

Perhaps you're the tune
That plays fond in my mind
Or a smile that shines
To brighten my night.

You are the one
Whom touches my soul
Kissing my pain
With the love you well show.

I'm only worthy to lie at your feet
Yet gently you urge
These strange feelings in me.

To grant you a wish
If only I could
With heartfelt emotion
You know that I would.

To hold you eternal
I'd give you my soul
To love you forever
This, dear, is my goal.

Fadedspirit 6/16/2009


Very nice! Thank you for sharing this...

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 06/16/09 10:04 AM
NIiiii-CE!

LAMom's photo
Wed 06/17/09 08:45 AM
Welcome Home,,,

Beautiful Soul you flowers

AngelLight's photo
Wed 06/17/09 09:50 AM
A sweet caressing write :heart:

jimz's photo
Wed 06/17/09 06:57 PM
nice write, you have a poetical voice that is truly lyrical. I hope things have been well for you my friend.

kc0003's photo
Wed 06/17/09 07:39 PM
nice to see you my friend

a good piece here

drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 06/18/09 01:33 PM
Beautiful write! flowers (((Fade)))

Hey stranger good to see you wander back home! WB!

Fadedspirit's photo
Sat 06/20/09 09:53 PM
Thank you vivian2981 for your comment, I'm glad you liked the write. :smile:

Hee hee Thanks DKW.flowerforyou

Aww thanks LAMom. happy I try to get back when I can. I miss y'all.flowers

Aww, thanks AngelLight. flowers

Hey there Jimz and thanks bro. Things have been pretty hectic here, but all is well. I hope all is well your way also. drinker

Thanks kc. Nice to see you again also. One of these days life is gonna calm down I hope....loldrinker

Awww thanks (((MsTeddyBear)))! I hope all is well with you. Sorry about being away for so long. I'm trying to come back more often. flowers happy