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Topic: Haiku for You
michiganman3's photo
Tue 07/07/09 05:39 PM
Write a Haiku poem about your last date.
The standard 5-7-5 syllable arrangement.


After long drive
Without the expectations
We had a fun time.




Abracadabra's photo
Tue 07/07/09 06:44 PM
eyes penetrate deep
cheeks blush out natural smiles
cosmic connection

time ceases to pass
unspoken communiqué
emotional charge

synchronized laughter
magnetic energy flows
natural embrace

My abode or yours?
journey to closest abode
ecstasy begins

embrace becomes hug
osculation commences
breath is like hot flame

clothes create a trail
silken sheets sunken into
teasing teeth nibble

perspiration rules
squeaky springs undulating
tantalizing tongues

cosmic explosion
pure masculine energy
volcanic lava

fingernails dig deep
woman screams deity's name
femininity

kisses flow softly
fervent whispers fill her ears
romantic bed talk

lifetimes are exchanged
giggles bubble from her lips
inner child released

the end is not nigh
an encore performance call
ardent lust replayed...


pitchfork


(sorry, it was a lengthy date bigsmile )

michiganman3's photo
Tue 07/07/09 06:49 PM
Mine was over 6 hrs. laugh laugh laugh

Holly4459's photo
Tue 07/07/09 06:54 PM
I wanted to go

but too far away

dammit I #!*7@*$#% you!

michiganman3's photo
Tue 07/07/09 07:48 PM
I'd like you to come
Have fun here in Michigan
Cherry Festival

Holly4459's photo
Tue 07/07/09 09:05 PM
That is very sweet

I would bring lots of luggage

fun timespitchfork

michiganman3's photo
Wed 07/08/09 04:03 PM
This thread may have died,
for no appreciation.
Not a "fork and dork"

Euphoric_Dissonance's photo
Wed 07/08/09 04:05 PM

Dating history
even lamer than haiku
now you've made me cry
laugh

michiganman3's photo
Wed 07/08/09 04:11 PM
Softest kiss ever
something gentle on my mind
Kiss me again, yes?

Holly4459's photo
Wed 07/08/09 04:16 PM
I'm trying to think of rhymes

it ain't easy being cheesy
...

All for you dear Mich....:wink:

michiganman3's photo
Wed 07/08/09 04:18 PM
laugh love laugh

Holly4459's photo
Wed 07/08/09 06:37 PM
that poem was about a kiss

I really should be mad

hell yeah I am mistergrumble

michiganman3's photo
Wed 07/08/09 06:46 PM
Read Me a Poem
Whisper it into my ear
Softer, Softer,yeeessssssss..

Holly4459's photo
Wed 07/08/09 06:56 PM
your arms feel so good

hold me closer and

watch those roaming hands

s1owhand's photo
Wed 07/08/09 07:18 PM
pleasant melody
two minds sharing harmony
closing eyes like cats

Holly4459's photo
Wed 07/08/09 07:19 PM
stars twinkling above us

it is all in the heavens

and in your eyes too

s1owhand's photo
Wed 07/08/09 07:23 PM
realization
shot to the solar plexus
laughter waterfall

michiganman3's photo
Wed 07/08/09 07:29 PM
Yeah, thats it keep them coming!!!!

s1owhand's photo
Wed 07/08/09 07:34 PM
Edited by s1owhand on Wed 07/08/09 07:37 PM
naked honesty
valentine in poetry
nothing to regret

Holly4459's photo
Wed 07/08/09 07:35 PM
i feel your skin on

a cool summers night

and i'm lost in time

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