Topic: Dream
EZ4Sheezy's photo
Sun 07/12/09 11:31 AM
this is not a suicide note. please don't take it that way. i will be here tomorrow.

I hate to wake up
And face today
In my dreams
I wish to stay
To make this happen
There might be a way
Where in my sleep
I can forever lay
Maybe in death
I'll find this contrast
Nothing left to solve
From present, future, and past
There I can find
Eternal dreams alas
I take in one deep breath
Cause this will be my last

kalunda's photo
Sun 07/12/09 02:30 PM
scared better be here tomorrow, you have a great deal to contribute, nice write!waving

alternativa's photo
Tue 07/14/09 07:40 PM

this is not a suicide note. please don't take it that way. i will be here tomorrow.

I hate to wake up
And face today
In my dreams
I wish to stay
To make this happen
There might be a way
Where in my sleep
I can forever lay
Maybe in death
I'll find this contrast
Nothing left to solve
From present, future, and past
There I can find
Eternal dreams alas
I take in one deep breath
Cause this will be my last


Emory,
The end of one thing is always the beginning of another. flowerforyou

Someday Soon ~ L. A. Reed

Let the rain fall down and cleanse my soul
And let me reach my highest goal
Let the sun come out and warm my heart
And show me how to make a new start
Let the birds soar high and sing their tune
And tell me that all will be well soon

Fusion99's photo
Tue 07/14/09 08:03 PM

this is not a suicide note. please don't take it that way. i will be here tomorrow.

I hate to wake up
And face today
In my dreams
I wish to stay
To make this happen
There might be a way
Where in my sleep
I can forever lay
Maybe in death
I'll find this contrast
Nothing left to solve
From present, future, and past
There I can find
Eternal dreams alas
I take in one deep breath
Cause this will be my last

I have to say that sometimes I hate it too, hate having to wake up because dreams were so much better than the banality of everday life. Hate having to make the choices that don't really change anything. You're right, this is not a suicide note, it's an expressive rage against normalcy. Well done!:thumbsup: