Topic: Inevitable
HuckleberryFinn's photo
Mon 11/02/09 08:28 AM
Inevitable

Infant soul escapes the womb
climbing toward another tomb
lessons learned along the way
tomorrow not promised to be a day

a long life, still so brief
moments stolen, time be thy thief
we laugh, play and grow so fast
a shadowed adult, by childhood passed

memories linger, flickering about
etched pain, worn out
but peace shall come, swift and true
how many tears will bury you....

Samoia's photo
Mon 11/02/09 12:58 PM
Painful, truthful, and well written.

no photo
Mon 11/02/09 01:03 PM
nice read drinker flowers

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Mon 11/02/09 01:14 PM
can I have one of those pills....lmao...thanks you two, have a great day.

pkh's photo
Mon 11/02/09 01:15 PM
good write

EkkoLost's photo
Mon 11/02/09 01:27 PM
Triple distilled!
pure grain!

kc0003's photo
Mon 11/02/09 02:18 PM
how many...indeed...

nice piece

drinker

jimz's photo
Mon 11/02/09 07:00 PM
awesome!

no photo
Mon 11/02/09 07:17 PM

Inevitable

Infant soul escapes the womb
climbing toward another tomb
lessons learned along the way
tomorrow not promised to be a day

a long life, still so brief
moments stolen, time be thy thief
we laugh, play and grow so fast
a shadowed adult, by childhood passed

memories linger, flickering about
etched pain, worn out
but peace shall come, swift and true
how many tears will bury you....

When a writer is hurt, his words do bleed.
For virture of his blood red ink, expressions, for you to think.
nice write man,,and good look at living...drinker