Topic: Silence
writer_gurl's photo
Mon 12/28/09 09:35 AM
Silence Unbound
Silence unabashed
it is me that it is found
How long will it last

Silence follows me
Wrapping me in its presence
I am what it seeks
as I pray for deliverance

Silence cuts like a knife
and fits like a glove
Silence had trapped me in a dark night
Incapable of love

Silence tangles in knots
Silence tears the unbreakable
It embraces me in a lock
Silence hushes the unspeakable

Silence has a grip cold as ice
Enveloping me in a blanket
Silence makes me want to hide
trembling, how long can I take it

Silence lingers
Silence follows
When it captures
Silence makes you hollow


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Mon 12/28/09 10:03 AM
I really like that.flowerforyou

Queene123's photo
Mon 12/28/09 10:34 AM

Silence Unbound
Silence unabashed
it is me that it is found
How long will it last

Silence follows me
Wrapping me in its presence
I am what it seeks
as I pray for deliverance

Silence cuts like a knife
and fits like a glove
Silence had trapped me in a dark night
Incapable of love

Silence tangles in knots
Silence tears the unbreakable
It embraces me in a lock
Silence hushes the unspeakable

Silence has a grip cold as ice
Enveloping me in a blanket
Silence makes me want to hide
trembling, how long can I take it

Silence lingers
Silence follows
When it captures
Silence makes you hollow




adding to your poem

silence means the hopes are alive
as being quiet but yet look into the eyes as see the tears that have become.
as silence is trying to forgive one but yet many more suprises yet to come, can you though forgive untill the screams come about, as im not the one that wants to gather up the shattered pieces from the silence that has yet to come

climber83's photo
Mon 12/28/09 10:42 AM



Silence tangles in knots
Silence tears the unbreakable
It embraces me in a lock
Silence hushes the unspeakable



Wow, good writeflowerforyou

writer_gurl's photo
Mon 12/28/09 10:50 AM

Thanx everyone...It has been what I was feeling for awhile, it seemsohwell

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Mon 12/28/09 11:10 AM
great write!!