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Topic: When WARlds Collide
d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Wed 02/17/10 02:53 PM
I'm kissing one girl touching another girl thinking of some other girl and it hits me in the chest around my heart this doesnt seem right I should be thinking of one girl kissing that one girl touching our whole world

thewaterbearer Joined Sun 10/25/09 Posts: 19759	Wed 02/17/10 02:57 PM
Nice

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Wed 02/17/10 02:58 PM
bare powerful poetic songlike

plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Wed 02/17/10 06:56 PM
Dig it. Nice write, d.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 02/17/10 09:25 PM
The only way to be man,,,NICE WRITE BRO,,,

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Thu 02/18/10 06:41 AM
Heart felt

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 02/18/10 11:29 AM
Beautiful

MzEm Joined Wed 03/25/09 Posts: 1558	Thu 02/18/10 12:34 PM
Awww that's so sweet! Good one D....

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Thu 02/18/10 12:43 PM
Great!!

Englishrose2 Joined Sat 09/26/09 Posts: 1145	Thu 02/18/10 12:45 PM
Cute Anna x

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