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Topic: my dearest friend
Spirograph Joined Mon 09/15/08 Posts: 7011	Fri 04/02/10 08:11 PM
I've tasted your rusted metalic sting, I've written you poems and words to sing. We're all alone just you and I, I close my eyes, prepared to fly. My stress relief and closest one, They don't approve the things we've done. We turn away and laugh at them, They don't understand my closest friend. Just one more time, my shining friend, Away from home, 'round another bend, Just one more time for you and me, Goodnight to all and blessed be. We've been together through thick and thin, Through blessed joy and wicked sin. It is so fitting my dear dear friend, That its only us, in the end.

plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Sun 04/04/10 10:33 PM
Dig it - great write. "We've been together through thick and thin, Through blessed joy and wicked sin." I especially liked that part. Well done and cheers.

gstaats7938 Joined Sun 03/22/09 Posts: 515	Sun 04/04/10 10:37 PM
I've tasted your rusted metalic sting, I've written you poems and words to sing. We're all alone just you and I, I close my eyes, prepared to fly. My stress relief and closest one, They don't approve the things we've done. We turn away and laugh at them, They don't understand my closest friend. Just one more time, my shining friend, Away from home, 'round another bend, Just one more time for you and me, Goodnight to all and blessed be. We've been together through thick and thin, Through blessed joy and wicked sin. It is so fitting my dear dear friend, That its only us, in the end.

LeighAnna9 Joined Sun 08/16/09 Posts: 5638	Sun 04/04/10 10:39 PM
Awesome write.

Spirograph Joined Mon 09/15/08 Posts: 7011	Thu 06/03/10 08:47 PM
thank you guys

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Thu 06/03/10 08:52 PM
hi spiro!

Spirograph Joined Mon 09/15/08 Posts: 7011	Thu 06/03/10 08:57 PM
hello dear, how have you been?

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Fri 06/04/10 09:56 AM
i'm good enjoyed it as always...

Spirograph Joined Mon 09/15/08 Posts: 7011	Fri 06/04/10 10:45 AM
A little dark.... but my stuff usually is.

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Fri 06/04/10 10:51 AM
Black is good. Ain't all seashells and orchids yanno... (((Spiro)))

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 06/04/10 12:55 PM
I've tasted your rusted metalic sting, I've written you poems and words to sing. We're all alone just you and I, I close my eyes, prepared to fly. My stress relief and closest one, They don't approve the things we've done. We turn away and laugh at them, They don't understand my closest friend. Just one more time, my shining friend, Away from home, 'round another bend, Just one more time for you and me, Goodnight to all and blessed be. We've been together through thick and thin, Through blessed joy and wicked sin. It is so fitting my dear dear friend, That its only us, in the end. IF,,,wink,you added THIS at its end,,it would cover something compleltly different,,,wink,lol I close my eyes, prepared to fly. For with this pistol, I shall die!!!! This was a great write and from the heart,,,thanks for sharing.

Spirograph Joined Mon 09/15/08 Posts: 7011	Fri 06/04/10 02:54 PM
Pistols are too messy...... my dearest friend is much more elegant than that.

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