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Topic: Our Crossing.
iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 04/26/10 03:06 PM
As I crossed your mind today, Did you stop me and ask me to stay? Were you watching me, in the pictures of your mind. Was I smiling and singing to all mankind? Could you read my thoughts, and help me untie some knots? You see, I to had you cross my mind today. And when you went by, I jumped in your way. You smiled so big, and gave me an embrace. We were so close, as I stared at your beautiful face. I lend in toward you, as you softly closed your eyes. We fell into a kiss, under aqua deep blue skies. Slowly pulling apart, eyes opening, to see each reflections. And we stared so deeply into our souls, imaginations. As I crossed your mind today. I was hoping you felt this also, along your way.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 04/26/10 04:49 PM
I thought,,maybe I did??

dnc4Him Joined Fri 11/14/08 Posts: 2035	Mon 04/26/10 08:34 PM
very lucky lady

zanne46 Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5610	Mon 04/26/10 09:57 PM
Very nice write Terry....xoxoxo

Tessa02 Joined Tue 02/16/10 Posts: 2519	Mon 04/26/10 11:16 PM
Actually you did cross my mind today!! Thought of you traveling & wondering if you were having to drive through rain or sunny skies!!! Nice write!!!

Queene123 Joined Tue 06/26/07 Posts: 17056	Tue 04/27/10 01:00 AM
As I crossed your mind today, Did you stop me and ask me to stay? Were you watching me, in the pictures of your mind. Was I smiling and singing to all mankind? Could you read my thoughts, and help me untie some knots? You see, I to had you cross my mind today. And when you went by, I jumped in your way. You smiled so big, and gave me an embrace. We were so close, as I stared at your beautiful face. I lend in toward you, as you softly closed your eyes. We fell into a kiss, under aqua deep blue skies. Slowly pulling apart, eyes opening, to see each reflections. And we stared so deeply into our souls, imaginations. As I crossed your mind today. I was hoping you felt this also, along your way. i added to your poem did you stop and think where you have been heading as feeling lost and confused and in such a crazy daze as you tend to dream big which nothing is wrong with that as you pull apart and wonder away thinking what to do and see whats upon next in line as you soul is crossing differnt paths and a new journey is about to rise as your smile sings so loud with glee as i want to embrace you with all my might as i close my eyes i see a dance that had once been so open and so deep. as watching you through a stain glass full of beautiful colors bright and strong

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Tue 04/27/10 02:23 AM
that would be even better with music, as it is it made me

kdough Joined Sun 02/21/10 Posts: 86	Tue 04/27/10 05:25 AM
Yes T you cross my MIND quite OFTEN....

LightVoice Joined Thu 08/09/07 Posts: 7405	Tue 04/27/10 10:05 AM
Sweet, clever, ,playful.. a very fun read! My favorite lines; As I crossed your mind today, Did you stop me and ask me to stay? You see, I to had you cross my mind today. And when you went by, I jumped in your way.

Queene123 Joined Tue 06/26/07 Posts: 17056	Tue 04/27/10 11:14 AM
Sweet, clever, ,playful.. a very fun read! My favorite lines; As I crossed your mind today, Did you stop me and ask me to stay? You see, I to had you cross my mind today. And when you went by, I jumped in your way. adding more as i crossed your mind i hope you would stay and write a line or two and pray not in the wrongful way as be yourself the sweet and playful child we had known you once had been as your in my mind today can you come out and play as i jump to the sky if one can and have you watch what is wrong and what is right im playing the field i think with one emotions. which i know is wrong as a gentle kiss and a patt on the back should only be enough. as the heart has been broken to much as you know someone can be lucky in the eye to settle down with no issue at that

vikrnle Joined Wed 01/27/10 Posts: 493	Tue 04/27/10 11:20 AM
Sweet

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 04/28/10 06:44 PM
Sweet, clever, ,playful.. a very fun read! My favorite lines; As I crossed your mind today, Did you stop me and ask me to stay? You see, I to had you cross my mind today. And when you went by, I jumped in your way. Thank you LV,,and its all about the new Summer!!!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 04/29/10 01:58 PM Edited by iam4u on Thu 04/29/10 01:59 PM
that would be even better with music, as it is it made me Mano,,THATS about the nicest compliment I think I have ever received from another man...Thank you.... And NO,,,WE'RE NOT GOING OUT!!! Thats my real,,and my humor.... But really,,If it made YOUR eyes red,,,then my WORDS,,,hit the real meaning of their actions. To MAKE folks,,,FEEL....

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Thu 04/29/10 02:24 PM
And NO,,,WE'RE NOT GOING OUT!!!

delilady Joined Fri 07/24/09 Posts: 23825	Thu 04/29/10 02:42 PM
Very heartwarming, Terry!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 05/02/10 07:05 PM
Very heartwarming, Terry! Thanks very much for reading,,,wink,