Topic: Rain Wishes
mig25's photo
Sun 05/30/10 04:51 AM
Rain Wishes


Sitting in the cold
thinking, I guess
of rain wishes.
It depresses me to feel the drops ravage my soul;
I cry a little
and hope for another day

Time passes
and I’m still here
sitting in the cold;
feeling chills come and go
like the wind I want to fly with.
I hate shivering. I hate it.
Nothing to keep me dry
nothing to keep me warm
other than thoughts of you.
I feel so depressed;
I close my eyes and hope for another day.

The cold rain,
synchronized with the rhythm of my hearts’ beat,
plays the blues.
I don’t want to think anymore.
I just want to see the sun
shining as bright as love again;
to feel it embrace my eyes while they’re closed.
I want to feel its radiant heat;
I want remember the burning passion that lover’s share.
I want to feel it wash over me.
I hate shivering. I hate it.
I hate these rain wishes.
They leave me so depressed.
I want the day to end, I hope it does; and soon.
I need another day.




pkh's photo
Sun 05/30/10 05:46 AM
good write

May777's photo
Sun 05/30/10 06:37 AM
I like the comparison between your lover`s warmth & the sun drinker

mig25's photo
Sun 05/30/10 05:38 PM
thanks.

no photo
Mon 05/31/10 12:33 PM
Hey Mig,,,man,,PLEASE,,keep on being YOU,,keep on writing from that REAL HEART and fire you have inside that allows you to type-out works like this..I have followed many of your writes and you have that truth through living,,,power and strength to draw from,,,all embedded inside your soul,,,keep bring it to the surfice,,and it will soon,,over-power everyone who reads them....TRUE THAT!!!!
:wink: drinker :heart: