Topic: Broken hearted poem
TheCaptain's photo
Mon 06/28/10 12:03 AM
This is just off the top of my head, and its late, so..........


A woman sits alone in her chair
Moments before it seems, he was there
Their laughter once filled the room
if they only knew thier doom
Happiness and hope had lied
knowing that her true love died
The womans dreams were blown apart
Alone in her chair, with a broken heart.

LAMom's photo
Mon 06/28/10 07:32 AM

This is just off the top of my head, and its late, so..........


A woman sits alone in her chair
Moments before it seems, he was there
Their laughter once filled the room
if they only knew thier doom
Happiness and hope had lied
knowing that her true love died
The womans dreams were blown apart
Alone in her chair, with a broken heart.



Awwwwwww Cappy...

Sadly Beautifulflowerforyou

TheCaptain's photo
Mon 06/28/10 09:37 AM
Thank you so much Denise.

Your opinion means a lot to me.

RowBaby's photo
Mon 06/28/10 09:42 AM
Heart breaking Cap.
I liked it. flowerforyou

no photo
Mon 06/28/10 09:44 AM
flowers

eileena9's photo
Mon 06/28/10 01:15 PM
I love you babyflowers :heart:

TheCaptain's photo
Mon 06/28/10 01:41 PM
You are the best my love.

no photo
Mon 06/28/10 09:02 PM

This is just off the top of my head, and its late, so..........


A woman sits alone in her chair
Moments before it seems, he was there
Their laughter once filled the room
if they only knew thier doom
Happiness and hope had lied
knowing that her true love died
The womans dreams were blown apart
Alone in her chair, with a broken heart.

This is very good Cap...REALLY!!!
And your pic here is also really good...drinker :wink:

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 06/28/10 09:41 PM
touching, sweet, sad and beautiful!! :heart:

Mystique42's photo
Tue 06/29/10 02:06 PM
Awe.... sad, but a beautiful write! Good one Capt'n!flowerforyou

BonnyMiss's photo
Tue 06/29/10 03:41 PM
Nice one.

kc0003's photo
Tue 06/29/10 06:12 PM
drinker