Topic: just want to say goodbye
joejealousy's photo
Sun 08/22/10 06:54 PM
you truely liked me
and in turn i liked you back
you sincerely loved me
and I loved you back
somewhere, something went wrong
the spark of love faded from eyes
so i loved you harder
yet, your touch became colder
I gave more than i had ever given
and again you became even more distant
i gave you your space and hoped for the best
your smile never warmed,
and i aged a year, with every tear
i gave up, i can not make you love me
but i loved you completely with my whole heart
then you broke my heart
but i want you to know
i will forever love you
with all the little pieces of heart you left me with

tanyaann's photo
Sun 08/22/10 07:06 PM
Good write flowerforyou

Queene123's photo
Sun 08/22/10 08:05 PM
Edited by Queene123 on Sun 08/22/10 08:06 PM

you truely liked me
and in turn i liked you back
you sincerely loved me
and I loved you back
somewhere, something went wrong
the spark of love faded from eyes
so i loved you harder
yet, your touch became colder
I gave more than i had ever given
and again you became even more distant
i gave you your space and hoped for the best
your smile never warmed,
and i aged a year, with every tear
i gave up, i can not make you love me
but i loved you completely with my whole heart
then you broke my heart
but i want you to know
i will forever love you
with all the little pieces of heart you left me with



adding to your poem


saying goodbye
is never the same
as rhe love that one
has in store
will remain the same
as you may feel
in ways lost in space
bit yet the heart
continues to roam
as the pieces
will mend
but over time
as the heart
will continue to
hurt and mend once more
love is always in store
with others around

Monier's photo
Sun 08/22/10 08:32 PM

you truely liked me
and in turn i liked you back
you sincerely loved me
and I loved you back
somewhere, something went wrong
the spark of love faded from eyes
so i loved you harder
yet, your touch became colder
I gave more than i had ever given
and again you became even more distant
i gave you your space and hoped for the best
your smile never warmed,
and i aged a year, with every tear
i gave up, i can not make you love me
but i loved you completely with my whole heart
then you broke my heart
but i want you to know
i will forever love you
with all the little pieces of heart you left me with


Been there, good one

ArtGurl's photo
Sun 08/22/10 09:25 PM
flowerforyou

nvkikigirl's photo
Sun 08/22/10 09:25 PM

you truely liked me
and in turn i liked you back
you sincerely loved me
and I loved you back
somewhere, something went wrong
the spark of love faded from eyes
so i loved you harder
yet, your touch became colder
I gave more than i had ever given
and again you became even more distant
i gave you your space and hoped for the best
your smile never warmed,
and i aged a year, with every tear
i gave up, i can not make you love me
but i loved you completely with my whole heart
then you broke my heart
but i want you to know
i will forever love you
with all the little pieces of heart you left me with



i like this..nice. flowerforyou