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Topic: ~ taste
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 10/06/10 07:16 AM
wake to flat,grey sky fresh morning snow tops the mountain edge caressing tree tops seeing how far whiteness can go white white as the tips of my manicured nails barefeet beg for wool zip the zipper taste of muted cinnamon warms the fall

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 10/06/10 07:24 AM
nice.

johnnyheartbeep Joined Mon 09/27/10 Posts: 33	Wed 10/06/10 07:37 AM
Lovely. There's a real lightness about it - it's like a snowflake falling. Love the line: "taste of muted cinnamon"

plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Wed 10/06/10 12:15 PM
Sounds so innocent. Dig the write, teasing.

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Wed 10/06/10 01:33 PM
I missed reading you!!! You always bring me to a better place.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 10/06/10 11:43 PM
...as always

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 10/06/10 11:50 PM
Very COOL!!!!

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 10/07/10 07:33 AM
2KidsMom....pleased you liked it.... johnnyheartbeep...thankyou for the lovely comments plastic_pancakes....long enough for ya..smiles..had to...teasin' Gossipmpm...and thankyou for finding me to read... kc...thanking you..as always.. iam4u...and yours also... teasingbrunette

blueeyedcutie93 Joined Thu 09/30/10 Posts: 319	Thu 10/07/10 10:05 AM
love it

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Fri 10/08/10 05:59 AM
blueeyedcutie93........that's great,thankyou!

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Mon 10/11/10 01:58 PM
brrrr...made me cold

Sandcrab Joined Fri 10/24/08 Posts: 1392	Sat 10/30/10 05:32 PM
fall is warmed by cinnamon...yes

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