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Edited by
Sharris
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Sat 11/06/10 09:49 AM
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Insistent memories wisps of lore
though time forgotten blew through my door like dried where color changed before you were remembered. It was not long ago my friend when you encouraged through this wind that I should flex that I should bend away into anew. Aye, we laughed and too did cry we went our ways said our good bye forgotten moments knotted true with ropes and ribbon thoughts of you. SadieLu 11/2010 |
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nice sadie
the first stanza is my favorite... each time i have read this, i keep saying the last word in the second stanza as, anew...not sure why... 
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nice sadie the first stanza is my favorite... each time i have read this, i keep saying the last word in the second stanza as, anew...not sure why... I tried anew, the beat doesn't sound right to me..Thank you, I love the feed back..I could hear this read..also. |
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and dropping "as always"
down a line was my next suggestion...lol |
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and dropping "as always" down a line was my next suggestion...lol hmmmmm |
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Edited by
bastet126
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Sat 11/06/10 09:29 AM
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and dropping "as always" down a line was my next suggestion...lol hmmmmm i can see this too, regardless, beautiful words as always |
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and dropping "as always" down a line was my next suggestion...lol hmmmmm i can see this too, regardless, beautiful words as always yes, I see..the implication is enough. thank you.. |
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Thank you for the suggestions. I will try them and feel through it..
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