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Topic: Someday
Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sat 11/06/10 06:52 PM
Thirsty you come parched I stand away sentimental curses of hopeless dismay. Words may come easily thoughts distanced deep it's all in the effort when the mountain is steep. Serendipitous collision a knowing of course unseen motivation in the missing remorse. Some in a daze. Some day's come and go Someday I'll get it right Someday I will know. SadieLu 11/2010

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 11/06/10 07:12 PM
Thirsty you come parched I stand away sentimental curses of hopeless dismay. Words may come easily thoughts distanced deep it's all in the effort when the mountain is steep. Serendipitous collision a knowing of course unseen motivation in the missing remorse. Some in a daze. Some day's come and go Someday I'll get it right Someday I will know. SadieLu 11/2010 Beautiful you,,

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sun 11/07/10 02:12 PM
so sweet..thank you, always..you are our faithful heart.

Oceanbluze Joined Thu 08/12/10 Posts: 1236	Sun 11/07/10 02:16 PM
thats nice, words come easily, thoughts distanced deep---NICE

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sun 11/07/10 02:35 PM
thats nice, words come easily, thoughts distanced deep---NICE Thank you..very kind

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sun 11/07/10 04:00 PM
"Serendipitous collision"....i really like that.

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sun 11/07/10 04:20 PM
thank you...

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 11/07/10 04:22 PM
Sadie.... some day we all will get it right

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sun 11/07/10 04:47 PM
Sadie.... some day we all will get it right yes, profound...thanks

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