Topic: Double Edges
DJL1's photo
Tue 03/15/11 05:31 PM
Double Edges

Love at times is a two edged sword
when everything rests on a word
that was not spoken as was heard.

Justification with exaggeration

Emotions crack like broken eggs
leaving the heart with wooden pegs
marks a fence line that only begs.

Divisions with partitions

Physically closed like cold steel bars
that wedge and prod old love scars,
drawing shades on moon and stars.

The two edged sword-

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Thu 03/17/11 11:11 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Tue 03/22/11 11:30 AM
oh gosh that's a good write!:cry:

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Tue 03/22/11 11:38 AM
drinker flowers

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Tue 03/22/11 12:05 PM
That is a Shikerrific poem.

Can I use it on my WALL OF SHIKI as the Shik-Tastic Poem of the Week?

I'm not being sarcastic here. It is very good.