Topic: Ballerina in Flames......
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Sun 06/26/11 12:47 PM
Edited by Up2Us on Sun 06/26/11 12:54 PM


Ballerina in Flames

Out of the ashes of whimsical heartache.
A enthralled butterfly survives the rain.
Lies, mind games, and ruined emotional deceit.
Appears a relentless stranger, in a broken mirror of internal conflict
gentle ballerina dances within flames.

A beautiful phoenix emerges out of the ashes of heartache.

Submissive, sensual, silhouetted candy held in sight.
Passionate, frightened, at each new breath upon her soul.
Consuming every moment, minute by minute a timeless passion.
Piercing the fabric of eternity, a refugee in flight.

A beautiful phoenix emerges out of the ashes of heartache.

Emotional anguish becomes a memory, chained by inner peace.
Boisterous tears reflected on the horizon of her eyes.
Speaking a introspective language of themselves.
Relentless glass paradox erupts in flames.

A beautiful phoenix emerges out of the ashes of heartache.

Chaotic illusive dreamer, gracefully takes center stage.
Stoic analytical warrior in the mist of pain.
A child of destiny, flames burn within her sweet pensive soul.
Nostalgic, apathetic, untamed wild fire a defiant spirit.
Beautiful ballerina a phoenix rages within her inner light.

Poem:
MHS©Copyright 2011

Teditis's photo
Sun 06/26/11 01:23 PM
Arg... I fell for one of these once... she reamins beautiful... I feel like ash.

Nice write.drinker

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Sun 06/26/11 05:19 PM
This was great..

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Sun 06/26/11 05:35 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Tue 06/28/11 07:07 PM
Thanks all....flowerforyou

poppashroom's photo
Wed 06/29/11 01:19 AM
I like the write, where was the inspiration behind that my friend?

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Wed 06/29/11 06:46 AM

I like the write, where was the inspiration behind that my friend?
Most of my poems/stories/songs write themselves....smokin

poppashroom's photo
Wed 06/29/11 07:06 AM


I like the write, where was the inspiration behind that my friend?
Most of my poems/stories/songs write themselves....smokin

You write well, I long to write as well as that.

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Wed 06/29/11 07:25 AM



I like the write, where was the inspiration behind that my friend?
Most of my poems/stories/songs write themselves....smokin

You write well, I long to write as well as that.
Funny you say that, I was thinking the same reading your material...smokin

poppashroom's photo
Wed 06/29/11 07:39 AM




I like the write, where was the inspiration behind that my friend?
Most of my poems/stories/songs write themselves....smokin

You write well, I long to write as well as that.
Funny you say that, I was thinking the same reading your material...smokin

Thank you,
It all fuels the fires of creation,

bastet126's photo
Wed 06/29/11 08:39 AM
a beautiful dance with the most graceful of adjectives ~ love this! flowerforyou

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Wed 06/29/11 11:06 AM

a beautiful dance with the most graceful of adjectives ~ love this! flowerforyou
Thank you....flowerforyou

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Wed 06/29/11 11:37 AM
I like the way the poem draws you into it. drinker drinker drinker

thewaterbearer's photo
Wed 06/29/11 12:35 PM
What a beautiful write and I love the picture.flowerforyou

mig25's photo
Thu 06/30/11 12:44 AM
The picture was nice but not needed after all you art painted it for us. Nice write.

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Wed 10/08/14 06:26 PM
Bumping up a old write.....smokin

I also miss a few of my old mingle friends....:heart: drinker

bastet126's photo
Thu 10/09/14 03:07 PM
i hope i am ONE of them :)

...still amazing adjectives! flowerforyou

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Thu 10/09/14 03:45 PM

i hope i am ONE of them :)

...still amazing adjectives! flowerforyou

Hey you.....:heart: flowerforyou :heart: