Topic: Renaissance of heartache.....
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Fri 08/05/11 07:21 AM
Edited by Up2Us on Fri 08/05/11 07:22 AM


Renaissance of heartache

Gothic fallen angels of anguish,
with a unrelinquishing thirst.
Walking unnoticed across
the sands of time.
Sentimental daydreams slow dance
by candle light.

Renaissance of heartache

Never aging, twilight sexuality.
So beautiful, nostalgic fantasies.
Exotic field of Gothic dreams.
Narcissism reflected by a blind mirror.
Eloquent wildflowers engulfed in flames
of passion.

Renaissance of heartache

Shadows of ancient languages flow like a
river across centuries.
Ageless beings, held captive by
a deleterious thirst.
Spreading their wings like a labyrinth spiderweb.
Picturesque archaeology a modern guillotine.
A swinging pendulum cutting through minds.
A source to quench their thirst found within
the social media of a immortal lair.



Poem:
MHS©Copyright 2011

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Fri 08/05/11 07:33 AM
Visuals are indeed up front.

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Fri 08/05/11 07:34 AM
drinker loved it.:banana:

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Fri 08/05/11 11:45 AM
i resemble this!! and yes, i am quenching my thirst in the immortal lair, buhwahahaha!!! very nice! flowerforyou

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Fri 08/05/11 12:07 PM

i resemble this!! and yes, i am quenching my thirst in the immortal lair, buhwahahaha!!! very nice! flowerforyou
Thanks all.....smokin

Bastet, I thought you would like that last line......laugh

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Fri 08/05/11 08:13 PM
Edited by Ainjel on Fri 08/05/11 08:14 PM
I thought this was beautiful up2us..I'll stick with my own visual, rather then the one you posted...:tongue:

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Sat 08/06/11 02:17 AM
A nice write,
I heard of it so came to check it.
Indeed a story in itself.

'I don't get on here too much at the mo so excuse my random appearances all, will check you all as often as i can'

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Sat 08/06/11 06:53 AM

I thought this was beautiful up2us..I'll stick with my own visual, rather then the one you posted...:tongue:


A nice write,
I heard of it so came to check it.
Indeed a story in itself.

'I don't get on here too much at the mo so excuse my random appearances all, will check you all as often as i can'


Ainjel - Thanks, although I'm curious about your choice of visuals....laugh This one is just for a initial shock factor....laugh

poppashroom - Thanks for stopping by, always look forward to your writes. smokin