Topic: Your Brilliant!
d4tc's photo
Fri 08/19/11 06:59 PM









YOU

don't know you have it

b b b bbbb cuz uuuuuuU feellikee yoUR leWS-ING iitt!

but i will be that one that
has the 'guts'(love) to tell you
you got it

especially since i sense
the drive is hesitant

please, dont cease/

@best believe

be resilient --
pull down the shades
let me see pass the tint

beyond your corruptive niche

batters up, here's the pitch

you complain of this and that
with every breathe you spend

too much time worried in

lewering your standards

lowering our advantage

when you make a fool of me
you kill my belief

oh, please

i believe in you

knowing you breathe
eat sleep
two hands
two feet
somewhat healthy
unhappy you speak

just imagine if you
thought the way i see
you when i think you
have what it takes to be
rad or cool or just plain
brilliant and radical

you wouldn't need me
to tell you

Your Brilliant!

no.. no.. no..
you would know it
and show it but believe it
i don't see it

i know it is in you
so many choices like a menu
yet your head is down on the ground
hung horribly

please understand

i

love

poetry

please don't make me get literal
because the simplisticness does
nothing to this as that bores me

wait
know wait?
now wait..
wait?

Your Brilliant!

Your Brilliant!

Your Brilliant!

as we all our
heaven sent

hell bound if
we keep our heads down

we are all kings

F a Throne.

F a Crown.

its time to pick up that head
which is inGENIUSly proFOUND

your a verb
your a noun

your ever word, blurbed
with prosperity

between you and me

your brilliance is HEAVENly

oh, silly we

you, them, octopusknees

we all
OUR BRILLIANT

if only
we'd believe

i know i am
and i know


me
we
our
you

Your Brilliant!






ArtGurl's photo
Fri 08/19/11 08:12 PM
yes, you are flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Fri 08/19/11 08:21 PM
we

all

our

we just have to believe it.


flowerforyou drinker

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 08/19/11 08:23 PM
indeed :smile:

no photo
Fri 08/19/11 08:24 PM
your mind works

amazingly

well

lurchs_sister's photo
Fri 08/19/11 08:44 PM
only with
octopusknees
could you see
these
and these
that see
are reaching
out
through me
to thee

smooched