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Topic: All that you are............................
iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 09/01/11 09:43 AM
Like a mirror you pass by, reflecting, always present, never shall it lose your image. One small facet of your life to always believe. This object holds only truth, never to deceive. Somewhere at this very moment, a mirror waits for you. Don't be afraid to give it a glance, maybe even a wink. You see its only goal in life, is to make you think. So now you know its secrets, you looked over its real view. This mirror that holds you so close, really is in love with you.!

krishk20 Joined Thu 06/16/11 Posts: 1866	Thu 09/01/11 10:22 AM


Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Thu 09/01/11 12:51 PM
Cool write....

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 09/01/11 01:08 PM
Cool write.... Nice add up2,,,thanks man,,for replying,,and the pic,,,,

krishk20 Joined Thu 06/16/11 Posts: 1866	Thu 09/01/11 08:04 PM
Nice.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 09/01/11 08:45 PM
Nice. [/quote Thanks for stopping by man....

machug Joined Sun 09/04/11 Posts: 6601	Wed 09/07/11 10:26 AM
I love the message.

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 09/07/11 10:28 AM
Cool write....

prashant01 Joined Wed 05/06/09 Posts: 14148	Wed 09/07/11 10:42 AM Edited by prashant01 on Wed 09/07/11 10:42 AM
Cool write.... uhu..... so relevant

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Wed 09/07/11 11:21 AM
Amazing as always Brother Man

Gwendolyn2009 Joined Thu 04/30/09 Posts: 328	Wed 09/07/11 06:08 PM
The rhyme is a bit forced--poetry should flow and not grope for words.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 09/08/11 12:26 AM
Gwendolyn2009 Hi Hun,,,I was just wondering,,,,have WE ever met? Hey,,,kidding here and I am always open to opinions,,but,, I have to be VERY,,VERY HONEST HERE,,, No ONES EVER complained about my groping skills before,,

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