Topic: You Said
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Sun 07/22/07 09:53 AM
You said we’d learn to tango,
Said we’d sing our own new love song,
You said we’d share our dreams and visions,
Said our love would always be strong~
You laid our futures out before me,
With such a visionary look, and said
We held the future in our hands, we’d
Write our chapters to life’s book~
So I took the hand you held out,
and I walked the path we started,
With my eyes focused straight before me,
I stepped firmly on the bricks that you laid down,
Until I stumbled over your hesitation,
And felt the sad and true sensation,
of what it means to feel so very brokenhearted~
You said your love had died, you
said you didn’t feel the same, you couldn’t
Finish what you started, you didn’t mean
To cause me pain~
so I laid the phone receiver down,
cradled it quietly on Its hook,
as tears ran down my saddened face
I knew we wouldn’t write our book~
You said our dream was over,
It was another time and place~
Now I stand here empty handed,
My soul is bleeding and I cry,
Forever branded with the words ,
I heard you say~
You said “Goodbye”.

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Sun 07/22/07 09:59 AM


Wow Wiz......Very touching words indeed.flowerforyou

And so, so sad...flowerforyou

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Sun 07/22/07 10:00 AM
Yes....heartbreak is always sad...but it's one of life's lessons yes?

Good morning Sandy how are you today? flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 07/22/07 01:05 PM
wizard, we do mistakes, learn from them, promise ourselves, not to do it again, then do it again, vow that's beauty of love and lifeflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 07/22/07 01:55 PM
Yes Frank, life is about making mistakes, and we will continue to do it every day, yet learning from the ones from the day before....flowerforyou

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Sun 07/22/07 03:12 PM
:wink:

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Sun 07/22/07 03:16 PM
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sweetcountrygirl's photo
Tue 07/31/07 11:36 AM
WOW...
Glad I waited till today to read this one...
I can definetely relate here...
Great job Wiz!

:cry: brokenheart
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Tue 07/31/07 10:51 PM
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Wed 08/01/07 05:38 AM
very nice.flowerforyou