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poppashroom · 2012-05-13T14:26:02-07:00

Like a lion I roar, Sad as stone I soar Voice heard unheard hush Trees fall silent Great whispered crash Left memory Just space

Topic: quiet shout
poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Sun 05/13/12 02:26 PM
Like a lion I roar, Sad as stone I soar Voice heard unheard hush Trees fall silent Great whispered crash Left memory Just space

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sun 05/13/12 03:44 PM
i really like this, i truly do. something deep lays within its short metaphoric verse, i feel it's purpose intently. nicely done poppashroom :)

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Sun 05/13/12 04:20 PM
Like a lion I roar, Sad as stone I soar Voice heard unheard hush Trees fall silent Great whispered crash Left memory Just space I like it too...love it actually ...More than a metaphor, it is a metaphor within metaphors....Happy and fullfilled meets melancholy and empty time and time again...How good this is!!!!!