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Topic: Still Life
mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1543	Mon 07/02/12 04:02 PM
Still Life Clouds decorate the afternoon sky as the ocean’s waves crash against the rocky shore My soul feels the mist as drop by cold drop fall slowly with each tear The world moves though life for me remains as still as the pain of losing you It is time’s cruel injustice that I am alone today tomorrow and until the pain stops

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Mon 07/02/12 07:41 PM
Always an amazing write Mig..

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Mon 07/02/12 07:42 PM
Always an amazing write Mig..

jemare Joined Fri 04/24/09 Posts: 2105	Tue 07/03/12 08:49 AM
A sad but beautiful write. I enjoyed it as I took in the images of the clouds and the ocean breaking against the rocks.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 07/03/12 09:48 AM
Time is cruel when one is suffering emotional pain....Very nice Mig!

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Tue 07/03/12 01:09 PM
A lonely write, words well weaved,

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