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Topic: The Love Withers away Like a Rose
thewaterbearer Joined Sun 10/25/09 Posts: 19759	Sat 09/22/12 01:45 PM
The rose grows and opens slowly with the thorns on the side, just like love, the soft gentle touch of the petals, as they open wide, wanting to reach out to touch the petals, ouch watch the thorns, they hurt, causing you to bleed, just like love, the petals stay awhile than they crumble to the ground shriveled when you step on them they crunch into small pieces just like love, but the beauty of a rose, makes you love all over again, but watch out for the thorns, they will get you everytime. However don't let dying love stop you from following your dreams.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 09/23/12 07:17 AM


pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Sun 09/23/12 08:26 AM
Nice write.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Mon 09/24/12 06:52 AM Edited by tazzops on Mon 09/24/12 06:56 AM


thewaterbearer Joined Sun 10/25/09 Posts: 19759	Mon 09/24/12 09:12 AM
Soooo pretty, fresh roses, like a new beginning

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Mon 09/24/12 10:48 AM
Soooo pretty, fresh roses, like a new beginning

alone113 Joined Thu 08/23/12 Posts: 95	Mon 09/24/12 08:41 PM


Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Mon 09/24/12 09:03 PM
Papering petals have a beauty of their own.

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