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Topic: Oh poor love!
Solace84 Joined Mon 04/30/12 Posts: 322	Fri 01/18/13 05:26 PM
Oh poor love! Folks misuse me cos am innocent Oh poor love! They misuse me cos am so caring Oh poor love! They misuse me cos i dont bear grudges Oh poor love! They keep confessing me when infatuated Oh poor love! Stop crying cos you re enduring Oh poor love! So tired of enduring Oh poor love! Will jump into an Ocean Oh poor love! Cos nobody loves me Oh poor love.

Zimzane2 Joined Mon 01/14/13 Posts: 221	Fri 01/18/13 06:47 PM
Liked that.

Solace84 Joined Mon 04/30/12 Posts: 322	Sat 01/19/13 12:11 AM
Tnx,ma'am!

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Sat 01/19/13 04:21 AM Edited by AthenaRose2 on Sat 01/19/13 04:28 AM
Oh poor love! Folks misuse me cos am innocent Oh poor love! They misuse me cos am so caring Oh poor love! They misuse me cos i dont bear grudges Oh poor love! They keep confessing me when infatuated Oh poor love! Stop crying cos you re enduring Oh poor love! So tired of enduring Oh poor love! Will jump into an Ocean Oh poor love! Cos nobody loves me Oh poor love. I just love a good pity party... and this poor love really shows how nice one can read... jumping into the ocean though, wow, a definite over reaction for love... but brings more intensity to the depth of loss felt... excellent write... Solace...

Solace84 Joined Mon 04/30/12 Posts: 322	Sat 01/19/13 05:33 AM
Thanks so very much

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