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Topic: Rock, Paper, Scissors
Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Wed 02/06/13 09:20 PM Edited by Up2Us on Wed 02/06/13 09:40 PM
Rock, Paper, Scissors Standing on a nameless rusty bridge, on a cold November morning. Brittany hastily scribbles a suicide note upon a piece of PAPER. Placing a ROCK on top of the note. Climbing silently out onto the ledge of the bridge. Brittany suddenly, screams out a name!!! Plunging a pair of long SCISSORS into her heart. Her body becomes animated, falling backwards. Hitting the frigged river, Brittany drifts like a blood soaked scarecrow in tainted red water. Slowly drifting, turning, thinking... why, why, why.... .

tayah12 Joined Tue 05/22/12 Posts: 134	Wed 02/06/13 10:00 PM
Suspenseful write. I'm still sitting here with my hand clasped over my mouth.

AthenaRose2 Joined Fri 11/09/12 Posts: 6972	Wed 02/06/13 11:37 PM
jeeeezzz, U2U, I'm shivering goose bumps... and this water is freezing, but I still can't reach Brittany to pull her out...

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Thu 02/07/13 08:40 AM Edited by Up2Us on Thu 02/07/13 08:51 AM
jeeeezzz, U2U, I'm shivering goose bumps... and this water is freezing, but I still can't reach Brittany to pull her out... Yep, Brittany was out of reach even from within... Thanks for reading AthenaRose2... .

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Thu 02/07/13 08:48 AM
Suspenseful write. I'm still sitting here with my hand clasped over my mouth. Yep tayah12, it's like a scary video....

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Thu 02/07/13 09:23 AM
Love the "whole" picture....Very emotional Ups!

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Thu 02/07/13 10:22 AM
Rock, Paper, Scissors Standing on a nameless rusty bridge, on a cold November morning. Brittany hastily scribbles a suicide note upon a piece of PAPER. Placing a ROCK on top of the note. Climbing silently out onto the ledge of the bridge. Brittany suddenly, screams out a name!!! Plunging a pair of long SCISSORS into her heart. Her body becomes animated, falling backwards. Hitting the frigged river, Brittany drifts like a blood soaked scarecrow in tainted red water. Slowly drifting, turning, thinking... why, why, why.... . Beautiful... simply beautiful. Why? and Why Not?

toolheart Joined Tue 11/04/08 Posts: 262	Thu 02/07/13 11:07 AM
scissors

KiK2me Joined Sun 01/06/13 Posts: 8732	Thu 02/07/13 12:44 PM
ouch how heart breaking...vivid !

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Thu 02/07/13 03:19 PM
Up2, you always have a way of bringing hard subjects to life, vividly; as real as we wish they weren't.... heartbreaking, yet again.

Rawrr_Girl Joined Sun 10/04/09 Posts: 4431	Thu 02/07/13 11:13 PM
I feel sad that Brittany didn't get to recover. I can relate to Brittany. That severe, searing heartbreak. Too painful to continue on with her life. A real eye-opener. .

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Fri 02/08/13 08:40 AM Edited by Up2Us on Fri 02/08/13 08:43 AM
Teditis - Love often answers questions with silence. bastet126 - Simply watching the reality of a dream with eyes wide shut. Rawrr_Girl - Love is a rose often covered with torns of heartache. Thanks all for reading & the comments.... .

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