Topic: Guys needed! Rate me
jaybay13's photo
Tue 08/27/13 09:21 AM
Hey guys just wanted to know what you think of my profile. Hit me up

Mortman's photo
Tue 08/27/13 06:08 PM
Looks like a good profile. I'd like to see more photos and a little more information about you.

The picture is cute. Bright, with a nice smile. The strapless dress one is kind of nice, too. I'd like to see a photo showing more of your body, to see if your shape really is athletic. I don't want to seem creepy, but I like seeing ladies in a nice dress. It's a nice way to set a first impression.

The text blurb does a nice job of briefly describing you. You could say a bit more about what kind of guy you seek. The "just ask" line is overused and a cop-out. You could type some more info, maybe just answering the questions you think guys might ask. My favorite profiles I've read are ones where the lady writes an example of what she'd like to do with her man. A walk down by the river, or favorite restaurant. Maybe a meal she likes to cook. Those mental images really stand out, sometimes. That text space can be as big or small as you like, so you could expand a bit and have some fun with it. Lots of people like to say that they care about being able to write a correct sentence, but I know lots of people hardly read the profiles, so you'll probably be fine, either way.

Good luck!

no photo
Tue 08/27/13 06:48 PM
Profile is good.

kdpublish's photo
Wed 08/28/13 08:58 PM
I would agree about not using the ask "ask me" almost ever women uses this. I would concrete and specific when listing activities. Just about anything does not hold any meaning. I would be specific Scuba and deep sea fish are worlds away from going on a cruise. You should answer the profile questions completely. A no answer is often taken as the less desirable of the choices. So for example if I see a yes kids live at home and a no answer by marriage. I assume that means that there is drama in that question or the women would have answered the question. I hope that helps.

Good Luck:
Keith