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Topic: ~ i am dressed
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 09/08/13 06:00 PM
i am dressed by the sun i am undressed by the moon in between i watch the leaves of the trees steal color from the sun i watch the sun sleeping in and going to bed,early i am dressed by the sun i am undressed by the moon

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 09/08/13 06:05 PM
and we wonder why so many people are enamored by the moon... always nice to read you...

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Mon 09/09/13 05:32 AM
And, you, teasing, are soooooo beautiful!!! A very nice, warm poem meant to share in what you must feel inside. I'll tell ye, I don't know how you do it, teasing. Always such nice words. You're always so very sweet. And always so fine! tommy boy / Ireland / Monday, Sept. 9th, 2013 ===

GYs41 Joined Thu 09/05/13 Posts: 149	Mon 09/09/13 05:47 AM
This is an exceptional poem...it's like Frost blended with Brautigan in a way neither guy would imagine possible. G.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 09/09/13 06:44 AM
Cyn, this is beyond beautiful...You capture!!!

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 09/09/13 04:32 PM
kc...back at you... tommy...charmer,you... GYs41....thankyou!...i appreciate your generous words.. Leigh...such pleasing words to me....

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