Topic: whats wrong with me
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Sat 09/01/07 10:07 PM
my heart can no longer stand loves embrace
to many times broke to feel such a waste
i gave you my love my soul and still you left me
for a man you already know your beauty wont see
he sees only his lust and his manly desire
he wont take his time to light you eternal fire
Behind closed doors i gave feelings you never felt
and in my blue eyes i made your heart truely melt
i gave you love that you will never again find
from a man who is honest and loving and kind
Romance you never wanted but i gave you anyways
and in our bed passion would turn hours to days
these are the things you said you would keep
but in the end my love for you was to deep
i gave you these cause as a part of me i must
you gave it up for someone else's sexual lust
and if you ever think you will find more than this
then your mistaken and headed for a lonely abyss
so everything i am is exactly what i let you see
so my question to you is What is wrong with me


this is a poem i wrote a while back so no simphathy needed anymore just thought i would share it with everyone here at jsh

blonderockermom's photo
Sat 09/01/07 10:19 PM
Ah covington....beautiful....thanks for sharingflowerforyou

oceangirl2005s's photo
Sat 09/01/07 10:20 PM
That's a beautiful poem!flowerforyou I'm glad to hear that you're better now!:smile:

pkh's photo
Sat 09/01/07 10:20 PM
Well it was very nice,but not all women and men are like that

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Sat 09/01/07 10:35 PM
ty all i have more poems to share if you all would like

Katertots37's photo
Sun 09/02/07 02:32 AM
That was beautiful covington and yes please share those others

Gryphyn's photo
Sun 09/02/07 04:21 AM
Good writing, post when you feel like it. Thats how it works around here. I like it.

:wink: glasses smokin bigsmile

G

HillFolk's photo
Sun 09/02/07 06:45 AM
This poem shows that you have artistic talent and there is a real flow to it.

Mystique42's photo
Sun 09/02/07 06:55 AM
Very nice writing!

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 09/02/07 06:59 AM
Nice flowerforyou

ChelleBelle's photo
Sun 09/02/07 06:59 AM
beautifully written....flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Sun 09/02/07 10:09 PM
Yes Beautifully Written,, flowerforyou

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Mon 09/03/07 05:32 AM
Truly and Awesome poem indeed very well written words that seem to come back and haunt most of us over and over again.bigsmile

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Mon 09/03/07 08:06 AM
It is so refreshing to see men who can write and arent afraid to share their thoughts and feelings...
Excellent poem!!!

Keep em coming
GEL

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Mon 09/03/07 08:08 AM
That's beautiful, Covington.