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Topic: I Don't Really Know . . . ( May I? )
tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Sun 03/30/14 06:20 AM Edited by tommyboy1101 on Sun 03/30/14 06:21 AM
=== I Don't Really Know . . . ( May I? ) What makes us step out beyond our own inner emotional selves? Take on an overly burdensome world, daily? A world which expects and demands all the answers. A world, in fact, we crumble inside our closed palms and laugh at while issuing cold, clambering negatives. A current world not wholly worthy of our warmth. I don't really know. We do set out to master ' all ' around us. We cling to common, self induced folly. We 'own' selves. We laugh at those who would sneer. For we have already mastered this in our own beings. Take into mind we claim this arrogant world, yes we do. We own it outright. We'll not be bled of self Spirit, no! It ain't gonna happen! For those others huddled in their own versions of self righteousness may just belong to the few. Now, here and at peace in this created 'self glow', I mingle with those who would have me. I find a oneness and true caring for those who would care to know the real me. They, " You " after all, are my real friends. And I Am at peace! tommy boy moran, Ireland. ===

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tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Sun 03/30/14 11:30 AM
Thanks, Tazz . . .

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 03/30/14 11:41 AM
'grand'

gibbs1602 Joined Wed 02/26/14 Posts: 5980	Sun 03/30/14 12:40 PM
lovely

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Mon 03/31/14 04:25 AM
Thank ye, one and all. tommy boy moran / Ireland ===

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Mon 03/31/14 06:46 AM
Loved it!!!!

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 03/31/14 06:55 AM
Bullseye!!! ..Beautifully stated, BRAVE!!!...Thank you for this one Tomo!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 03/31/14 06:07 PM
Lovely

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Rawrr_Girl Joined Sun 10/04/09 Posts: 4431	Mon 03/31/14 07:04 PM
I find a oneness and true caring for those who would care to know the real me. They, " You " after all, are my real friends. I especially like THIS bit.

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Wed 04/02/14 12:29 AM
Thanks so much, all. Very appreciative.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2627	Wed 04/02/14 12:41 AM
Deep and provocative Tommy, excellent!

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Wed 04/02/14 12:46 AM
Thanks very much, techno. tomo / Ireland ===

mowildflower Joined Tue 07/27/10 Posts: 892	Wed 04/02/14 03:38 AM
NICE, LOVED IT "And I Am at peace!" "At peace in this created 'self glow', I mingle with those who would have me." At peace with our self, what a wonderful place to be.

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Wed 04/02/14 09:58 AM


VirgoDragon915 Joined Wed 04/02/14 Posts: 3	Wed 04/02/14 06:18 PM
that was beautiful

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Thu 04/03/14 02:52 AM Edited by tommyboy1101 on Thu 04/03/14 02:55 AM
Virgo, thank ye so much. True, I 'dabbles a bit' but through it all, on that rare occasion, I strike up the band. Virgo, you're very kind, as with all the others who've popped in and taken their peeks at this quasi wealth of wordplay. And for this, and this alone, may I warmly and succinctly thank you???? I am here, and, I am with you. tommy boy moran / Ireland PS: Always remember, ye may also reach me at: irishtommymoran@hotmail.com Or, link up and become my 'friend' here in this fine website, Mingle2. I shall welcome and respect all requests. ===