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instead of drifting
i'm falling instead of floating i'm drowning you say my words are deep i say they're like rain in balloons look into my eyes look into my teardrops instead of drifting i'm falling instead of floating i'm drowning |
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c'mere you...(((C)))
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Sweet....
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So true!!!
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Lovely, but sad... hugs
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A very, very well done piece, in brief, teasing. I really enjoy your depth - with deeper meanings. Rain on a balloon? Impact plus, Darlin'. And as for your shorter pieces you say so much using so few words. Your content here surprises me. Pleases me. Enchants me. I bow!
tomo / "The Island" === |
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