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Topic: ~ like rain in balloons
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 04/20/14 05:30 AM
instead of drifting i'm falling instead of floating i'm drowning you say my words are deep i say they're like rain in balloons look into my eyes look into my teardrops instead of drifting i'm falling instead of floating i'm drowning

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 04/20/14 06:00 AM


kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Sun 04/20/14 11:49 AM
c'mere you...(((C)))

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 05/03/14 09:26 PM
Sweet....

hellsboy007 Joined Tue 04/29/14 Posts: 992	Sun 05/04/14 12:00 AM
So true!!!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Sun 05/04/14 12:00 AM
Lovely, but sad... hugs

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Sun 05/04/14 01:20 AM
A very, very well done piece, in brief, teasing. I really enjoy your depth - with deeper meanings. Rain on a balloon? Impact plus, Darlin'. And as for your shorter pieces you say so much using so few words. Your content here surprises me. Pleases me. Enchants me. I bow! tomo / "The Island" ===

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