What tears are shed
Cannot be captured in a vial
Only swallowed
And it is as if I choke on
Ocean waves
Of Brine

The surf is a rhythm
As there is timing in
The seasons
The heart
The steps taken to make
One's way
Leaving impressions

On people
Places
In the sand
And we build castles
Spend hours
Translated to days
To years
Building castles
And our eyes make
Rain

The rhythm of the heart
The step of feet
Making impressions that
Wash away
As do the clouds pass
As do ships pass
What tears are shed are
Swallowed
Hard

Mistakes made
Do not make mistakes
And as sure as my prints
On the sand reveal
Is washed away
In sunset's glory
And tears swallowed
Are still tears
As we shed them
We shed a time of passing

sorry about posting a boat-load
hehe
i guess i miss it here

funky
kiss

very nice
All tears shed at the graveside are words left unspoken.
That's why I tell my mum I love her every single day

Taz
kiss

i have a channel, if you want to hear

http://youtu.be/BdYfIKTbE9k

In my view tears are weird, if they are shed you always learn and get better and better with time. And if somebody is so lucky that they never shed a tear and they have everything in every way, then one day all this huge mountain like structure fall in sadness and grief so then the pain (of tears) is to its supreme level, i don't know if someone can understand what i have said, or was i making no sense.

you make sense.
i think, if we ignore pain, it will be less effective. to feel is something. it is a gift to feel.

This I don't agree with.
Not when you have lost someone close, it never gets better, you just learn to come to terms with it a little.

i am sorry for your loss.
my tears are not for someone who has passed. i am grateful for that. i do still morn the loss of loved ones, due to the isolation of a move. of course, no one could know this. it is something i choose not to share.

Good to see you and read you

2kids
you're freakin awesome

I'm from Pakistan, so here a lot of time if a husband of a woman dies and she has kids, she mostly won't get married again or never even date a guy rather devote herself to her kids and her griefs by remembering her loved one (her husband)


But here in this website the western people may have bunch of x'es and even kids from past relationship but yet she would be willing to find another man again for her for her life.

This shows that some people just don't get used too with pain rather they wanna forget the pain and you can see all kind of ages women / men seeking someone.

So in my view people in west just don't know what tears is because they forgot the religion so for them religion is private business and living a life other than religion is something mutual, that's why they wanna find someone in this mutuality leaving the religion behind.

In reality religion is the base we need to get hold of the true religion and then based on the teaching of that religion we should find mutuality for us.


I know its complicated and you can disagree :)


Abdullah.

No worries Hun.
I wasn't looking for sympathy, I've had enough of that to last me a lifetime.
I see you think 2k is awesome, so do I, and I think you are too.

Seeks
tears are not always for the death of a loved one. tears can be as plentiful as the eyes that produce them.

maybe this will help...

http://youtu.be/BdYfIKTbE9k

thank you
<3

Excellent write....

very nice poem!