Topic: <O>
Ladywind7's photo
Wed 06/18/14 12:03 AM
Your passion
For my passion
Is passionless.
Your lies serve to sever.
Your lacklustre word
The magician's sword

Sweeping silhouettes
Cloaked pirouettes
Elusive illusions,
Darkened glass and smokin'
You see what you see,
You get what you give,
My love for you;
Sword to mirror.
Shattered
Broken.

Ladywindnz 2014 copyright

isaac_dede's photo
Wed 06/18/14 12:08 AM
flowers

mikey5360's photo
Wed 06/18/14 12:09 AM
Sad but nice

Argo's photo
Wed 06/18/14 12:58 AM


i found it very good, and the ending really hit home for me...thanx Ladywind7


no photo
Wed 06/18/14 03:47 AM

Your passion
For my passion
Is passionless.
Your lies serve to sever.
Your lacklustre word
The magician's sword

Sweeping silhouettes
Cloaked pirouettes
Elusive illusions,
Darkened glass and smokin'
You see what you see,
You get what you give,
My love for you;
Sword to mirror.
Shattered
Broken.

Ladywindnz 2014 copyright



Loved it:heart: flowerforyou

no photo
Wed 06/18/14 07:07 AM
flowers flowers flowers :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

no photo
Wed 06/18/14 10:34 AM
Nice write....brokenheart flowerforyou :heart:

isaac_dede's photo
Thu 06/19/14 02:09 AM

Your passion
For my passion
Is passionless.
Your lies serve to sever.
Your lacklustre word
The magician's sword

Sweeping silhouettes
Cloaked pirouettes
Elusive illusions,
Darkened glass and smokin'
You see what you see,
You get what you give,
My love for you;
Sword to mirror.
Shattered
Broken.

Ladywindnz 2014 copyright



The magicians sword
carries fire and ice
ice hardens
and breaks,
fire melts
broken glass
heated through
pieces merge
into art
forged in fire
something new



Ladywind7's photo
Fri 06/27/14 06:13 AM


Your passion
For my passion
Is passionless.
Your lies serve to sever.
Your lacklustre word
The magician's sword

Sweeping silhouettes
Cloaked pirouettes
Elusive illusions,
Darkened glass and smokin'
You see what you see,
You get what you give,
My love for you;
Sword to mirror.
Shattered
Broken.

Ladywindnz 2014 copyright



The magicians sword
carries fire and ice
ice hardens
and breaks,
fire melts
broken glass
heated through
pieces merge
into art
forged in fire
something new





I really like your ending. It shows optimism :smile:

Ladywind7's photo
Fri 06/27/14 06:14 AM
Thank you all for reading my scribbles. Smiles flowerforyou

no photo
Fri 06/27/14 06:35 AM

Your passion
For my passion
Is passionless.
Your lies serve to sever.
Your lacklustre word
The magician's sword

Sweeping silhouettes
Cloaked pirouettes
Elusive illusions,
Darkened glass and smokin'
You see what you see,
You get what you give,
My love for you;
Sword to mirror.
Shattered
Broken.

Ladywindnz 2014 copyright



Relating...Thank you Ladywind!flowerforyou