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Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sun 06/22/14 04:40 PM Edited by Up2Us on Sun 06/22/14 04:57 PM
Val Raindrop apologetic obsessions. Perplexed mysteries regress into bewildered torment. Contrite acid trips, meltdown exasperatedly. Time consumes her tarnished rambunctious soul. Twerking ridiculously, blind sunset humiliation. Victimized animation, relinquishing graffiti tears. Persecuted slave chained to a misinterpreted melody. Freedom becomes a pessimistic demoralized dream. Lifes hysterical ferris wheel, suspended between heaven & hell. She's got a ticket to ride, but I'm ok. Silverspoon nerd lost in a zealous Social Media. Her sabotaged exploited heroin homecoming . Vals' alluring exuberant suicidal addictions. Poem: MS�Copyright 2014 .

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1528	Sun 06/22/14 05:01 PM
Val Raindrop apologetic obsessions. Perplexed mysteries regress into bewildered torment. Contrite acid trips, meltdown exasperatedly. Time consumes her tarnished rambunctious soul. Twerking ridiculously, blind sunset humiliation. Victimized animation, relinquishing graffiti tears. Persecuted slave chained to a misinterpreted melody. Freedom becomes a pessimistic demoralized dream. Lifes hysterical ferris wheel, suspended between heaven & hell. She's got a ticket to ride, but I'm ok. Silverspoon nerd lost in a zealous Social Media. Her sabotaged exploited heroin homecoming . Vals' alluring exuberant suicidal addictions. Poem: MS�Copyright 2014 . One day I'll be able to write something a deep as this

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sun 06/22/14 05:47 PM
One day I'll be able to write something a deep as this Thank you my friend..... Your poems reach farther into the creative literary abyss.....deeper then mine on several different levels.

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Sun 06/22/14 06:13 PM
Great use of words Up2..

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sun 06/22/14 06:40 PM
Great use of words Up2.. Thank you.... Word Up...

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 06/22/14 07:35 PM
I could almost hear you saying the words......

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sun 06/22/14 07:51 PM Edited by Up2Us on Sun 06/22/14 07:51 PM
I could almost hear you saying the words...... Thank you.... What if I wrote about....falling in love with you. Would you hear me saying the words????? .

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 06/22/14 08:00 PM
...almost...

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sun 06/22/14 08:26 PM
...almost... Sometimes you have to read between the lines. Softly between the silence of each heartbeat, my heart whispers your name....

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 06/22/14 08:33 PM
you cannot know...how my heart needed your words.

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sun 06/22/14 09:03 PM Edited by Up2Us on Sun 06/22/14 09:03 PM
you cannot know...how my heart needed your words. Glad you heard them.... you're a true sweetheart. .

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Mon 06/23/14 06:11 AM


MariahsFantasy Joined Mon 11/28/11 Posts: 6593	Mon 06/23/14 10:16 AM
Wow, really crazy good.

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Mon 06/23/14 11:32 AM
Thanks for reading tazz.... Thank you MariahsFantasy....

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Tue 07/01/14 07:47 PM
I was just listening to this song, and thought about this write.... Amy Winehouse - Valerie http://youtu.be/namFjcOgHSE

mysticalview21 Joined Sat 06/28/14 Posts: 5462	Wed 07/02/14 08:15 AM
I did not read the picture distracted me... to funny

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Wed 07/02/14 09:40 AM
I did not read the picture distracted me... to funny I know.... I also fell out over the picture.

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Fri 09/01/17 05:10 PM
This still makes me laugh....