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Ready to break out and dance. That indeed would be a sight.
 
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 Very Nice, I like the way it flows. feathered remnants of a newly found Soul touch me, walk with me, share your songs of merriment and gladness |
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TB do you write anything other than these proses? You draw a good picture so it only makes sense that you have applied it else where?
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Edited by
tommyboy1101
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Tue 12/30/14 01:51 AM
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Mo, thank ye, as always.
Stopteasing, I work at light, self publishing from time to time, like on Twitter and Facebook, but other than that I just dance these keys and see what pops up. So often, after the fact, I notice my work fails me. Still I remain confident in that, eventually someone out there with credentials in the publishing industry will pick up on me and get in touch for the purposes of publishing my slender portfolio - with contractual obligations attached of course. Thank ye both. Your support is appreciated. Allow that I remain respectfully yours, tommy boy moran / Ireland PS: I note at least 2 typo errors in this piece. Can ye spot them too? So typical of me. Proofreading, editing is not my fort�. But then, once I have a publishing company aboard these light blemishes will surely be corrected automatically and all will be better. 
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Edited by
mowildflower
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Tue 12/30/14 06:03 AM
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Errors
typo, spelling, punctuation call it what you may after the fact, it screams out that's not correct, it's too late I must do better, take more time to proofread before pushing the button to post |
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Edited by
mysticalview21
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Tue 12/30/14 01:13 PM
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Errors typo, spelling, punctuation call it what you may after the fact, it screams out that's not correct, it's too late I must do better, take more time to proofread before pushing the button to post or take more time before pushing my buttons lol liked this op ... |
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Vasaline machine,
Love potion with a greasy notion, Vasaline machine yeah, All over my body and in my hair. Next verse please ;) |
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.....Vaseline Machine,
Vaseline Machine Slipped to the side Then its easy glide Vaseline Machine Uh Huh! Back to you brugmansia: |
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Vaseline Machine....
Vaseline Machine Ain't come'n clean Them shaved gerbils is mighty mean I got no doubt It's half way in or part way out Lap more Vaseline In that spout Fill that shoot Load'em in Just one more Makes it ten. Load it up! Back at ya! |
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Vasaline machine,
10 gerbils dead, tried a cat instead, vasaline machine yeah, The cat wasn't keen, It just made it mean, Claws still scratch through vasaline. Vasaline machine, Tried a different tack, lying on my back, vasaline machine, Shaved the cats hair, No claws oh yeah. Back again to you.You sick,sick man.Beats being boringly heartbroken.I thank you for the sick little diversion. |
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Edited for vulgarity.
soufie Site Moderator |
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Tommy .. THAT is one God Damn Good Poem !!!
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Vitsec,
You know I appreciate your words of support. Thank ye pal. May we always be friends-in-kind. tommo / Ireland |
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