Just getting ideas of what to add or take out.

Looks good to me ....Welcome to Mingleland, play safe and have fun

From your profile you have a lot to offer... Maybe it appears a bit disjointed because there is a lot, which is a pleasant surprise, maybe break it up a bit with paragraphs..

Also post some pictures showing your full face. Take one or two without a hat on you don't have to use it as your mail profile but having it there will help... Maybe some that shows some activities that you enjoy.

good luck and have fun out here

P.S. if you really didn't break your neck take that out please. I am a bit extreme on toys like 4 wheelers and snowmachines so I get that maybe humour or not.

I would add a pic of you smiling...apart from that looks good....good luck...