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Topic: -My Reality-
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Wed 10/10/07 06:33 AM

You stand before me shouting at me
Telling me that I live in a fantasy world
That I need to face reality
What you do not know is I live in reality
My reality may not be your reality
Or the worlds reality
I do know what goes on outside of my own reality
I am aware of the world
My reality allows me to be me
Your reality allows you to be you
So don't stand there shouting at me
About reality
I live in it
Day to day
I see more than you could ever possibly see
I am aware
I am here...

w_tarvin's photo
Wed 10/10/07 06:37 AM
sounds like someone pissed ya of there chubby

LightVoice's photo
Wed 10/10/07 06:37 AM
Your words beautifully express a Universal Truth :heart:

flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Wed 10/10/07 07:29 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart:

catchme_ifucan's photo
Wed 10/10/07 08:01 AM
flowerforyou :heart: (((Sis)))

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 10/11/07 05:56 AM
Ya tell them g/f hell ya :heart: flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 10/11/07 08:12 AM
Ah the beat of a different drum.....
flowerforyou

trustingfate's photo
Thu 10/11/07 11:40 AM
flowerforyou

SilverFae's photo
Thu 10/11/07 05:37 PM
beautiful!!! awareness brings on a reality few will ever understand......but you do *smiles* Peace and Light!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Thu 10/11/07 10:45 PM
Amazing what the closed minded truly consider reality....

Wolfeyes58's photo
Fri 10/12/07 06:51 AM
I think reality just sunk in so to speak...you tell them girl and don't back down.

pkh's photo
Fri 10/12/07 07:51 AM
Another one I've been through,touched me as always,love you girl HUGSflowerforyou

writerdude22's photo
Fri 10/12/07 01:17 PM
But what constitutes an individual's "reality?" How is that reality defined? And by saying that you'll see more than he/she will ever see in their reality, doesn't that make you guilty of the same elitist opinion as the other individual...that your reality is superior?

Reality is, as the poem touches on, completely subjective. But while the poem, on the surface, fights the idea that one subjective reality is better than another, it undercuts itself by saying that the speaker's reality is the ideal.

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Fri 10/12/07 02:31 PM
Thats just what you read into it writerdude..

blonderockermom's photo
Fri 10/12/07 02:35 PM
You totally live in reality girl, glad you stood your ground....way to let it out(((Hugz)) to you my friend:smile: flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Fri 10/12/07 05:16 PM
writerdude, my head is twisting, everytime I hear someone talk about subjective reality and other aspects of reality, it makes me wonder of your own reality, and to touch on this subject on an individual poem makes it all sound like nonsense, so I guess, William Blake, Hesse, Jack K, Ginsberg, and all the souls who made "subjective" reality, need to read your thread and maybe take an algebra class instead, open up your mind, and the only way that kind of critism helps is when you critisize yourself, that's the only way to learn of reality, anyway peace to you

no_psychos_please's photo
Fri 10/12/07 08:05 PM
Don't know how I missed this embarassed It is nice to know Cherubs exist with human emotions and we have one among us :heart:

If ya see cupid around, have him shoot an arrow up a certain ass so they will stop being a critic and start sharing some love :wink:

flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou smooched

no_psychos_please's photo
Fri 10/12/07 08:08 PM
BTW jimz GOOD SHOW MY BROTHER!!!!! drinker bigsmile

jimz's photo
Fri 10/12/07 09:08 PM
when someone like you calls me your brother, I'm in some cool company, I've learned, to learn from the wise, and you are one

LAMom's photo
Sat 10/13/07 12:01 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh wow left for a bit and wow is all I can say,,,

Open minds and hearts will allow one to fully engulf's ones heart and soul and then allow you to enter into there Reality,,, Ohhhhhhh my Jenni,, Reality you live in so beautifully,, so gracefully,,, Passion and Fire burn within
and within my reality I live in your soul.......

Hugs and love flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

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