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Topic: WERE YOU EVER THERE??
Swit30 Joined Tue 04/19/11 Posts: 172	Fri 06/26/15 08:47 AM
I toss and turn in my sleep thoughts of you in my mind slowly crept in Your indifference Gets me so I can't seem to let go Your warmth your tight embrace your smiling face They haunt my thoughts I can't forget I still haven't heard from you yet My friends console me Telling me to move on I can't seem to let go Your lack of care Your silence Were you ever there????

Foursure Joined Fri 01/09/15 Posts: 3231	Fri 06/26/15 06:59 PM
yeah .......... so many of us know all about this. Feel your pain. It is the big question.....was it ever 'real'? hang in there...you will recover

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Fri 06/26/15 07:52 PM
Swit, Very, very, Very nice!!!!

wildernessnick59 Joined Mon 06/29/15 Posts: 112	Thu 07/09/15 02:55 PM
A one night stand...comes to mind...a lack of respect to even wish you on your way...to be kissed...the feel of skin on skin...that little blue electric pulse that emanates from one to the other...

theseacoast Joined Wed 07/09/14 Posts: 7419	Thu 07/09/15 03:00 PM
Heartfelt

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Thu 07/09/15 03:11 PM
Take care of you...Lovely write Swit!

lu_rosemary Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 9123	Fri 07/10/15 12:56 AM


JaUkNz Joined Tue 02/10/15 Posts: 84	Sun 07/12/15 06:03 PM Edited by JaUkNz on Sun 07/12/15 06:04 PM
Love this. We have all felt it, been there. I don't know if this was written about a current painful experience, but sending big hugs anyway babe.

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