Hi there

Can you take a look at my profile and tell me if there is any way to improve it or should i just leave it the way that it is?

I was wondering if i put to much into it?

Thank's
Greg

A little too much, in my opinion.

Hello Greg,
I want to tell you I enjoyed reading your profile and Yes playing in leaves is a lot of fun and so is being a couch potato once in a while..

Welcome to the site and I believe you have one of the best profiles I have ever read or been asked to review it was a pleasure. Thank you...

Very nice. May the road rise to meet you.
Welcome!

In my opinion...its too long...girls turn on into something reserved profile As we expect a man has a few words to say to make it sound more interesting...

I enjoyed reading your profile. I don't see anything to change.

Best wishes and I hope you find who you are looking for.

it's a good profile
I am certain you will have no problem
finding people to chat with


welcome to mingle

It was pretty good
Showed intelligence, out going, talkative. That is very rare to find, dances slow and willing to try fast. (shaking head up and down, cool)
Cooks, I guess you clean. Plenty of. Different photos. Shows different sides of you. It won't take you long to find a very beautiful woman as there are plenty on here
But I have to be honest the last bit you wrote about she basically needs to be a looker came a cross stuck up. That's not say you are, that's what spoiled it but it's my opinion.
Good luck with your search.