Topic: TO YOU
Opalescence's photo
Wed 11/01/06 03:13 PM
TO YOU


To you I had always wanted to give

All of my love for as long as we lived


To have, to hold and cherish forever

But giving too much that was my error


Your love, it was the killing kind, you see

Asking, no, telling me just how to be


You remained adamant in every way

My most important task was to obey


You took and you took till there was no more

Draining me right down to the very core


Love has to go both ways if meant to last

Both edified to stay strong and steadfast


Now tis a kinder, gentler soul I seek

So that together we reach that high peek


My love, my life, my confidant and friend

Staying true to each other right to the end



By OMH





escapedlunatic's photo
Wed 11/01/06 03:16 PM
two thumbs up! or whatever lol..it was good very heartfilled!

Opalescence's photo
Wed 11/01/06 03:17 PM

Thanks, I think, hahaha.........an escaped lunatic?? Too cute! I
appreciate your kind words!

no photo
Wed 11/01/06 05:53 PM
ITS NICE!

ellgee1976's photo
Wed 11/01/06 10:16 PM
very nice..felt it :D

michael1313's photo
Thu 11/02/06 07:55 AM
is what I have been looking for...BRAVO!