Topic: My Reality
LAMom's photo
Fri 10/26/07 08:48 AM
Time stands still upon the hills
Souls sing in harmony
Life indeed has been a dream
Dreams to reality
Ponder my thoughts
Search my soul
Life indeed has been a dream
Once was asked
What it is I need
Touch my soul
You will release my mind
My heart you touched
My soul you saved
My love to you
I pledge this day
Touched by an angel
Your voice so sweet
Smiles and laughter
Your so sweet
You see its quite simple
My world is complete
Life indeed oh what a dream
Hand in hand with you
Mmmmmmmmm Reality

Samcbus's photo
Fri 10/26/07 08:54 AM
Nice poem. Did you write it? only negative, check your grammar.

Noden's photo
Fri 10/26/07 09:27 AM
A woman abreasted with only one thing on her mind, to scratch her words of love upon a poets page, to show him all her only desires, to shower him with words of fire.

So beautiful, and meant to the one and only, whom her heart is sent.


:heart: Lovely LaMom:heart:

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Fri 10/26/07 09:54 AM
:heart: Beautiful!:heart:

Gryphyn's photo
Fri 10/26/07 08:59 PM
Luv it, flowerforyou :heart: bigsmile

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ArtGurl's photo
Fri 10/26/07 09:42 PM
mmmmmmmm flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 10/26/07 10:35 PM
flowerforyou Nothing is sweetier than when your holding realily in the palm of yur hands and gazing into the eyes of your lovetbigsmile