Topic: hidden beauty
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Fri 10/26/07 10:22 PM
i wrote a poem for a very beautiful lady who does not see her own beauty
i thank her for helping me get thru a bout with writers block and i repay you the only way i can thru words of poetry. but i know this poem also applies to so many beautiful women out there so please feel free to share it with them.
your friend ace

Hidden beauty
A beauty that only a few will ever see
She keeps it hidden because she does not believe
She is a beautiful woman trapped by low self esteem
which leaves her trapped in a world in between
knowing your more than you appear
but closed inside so no one gets near
holding your head down in misplaced shame
hoping noone will remember your name
no feelings to share no love to be had
such a lonely life makes her feel sad
if she would open her eyes to the world around
then she would see the joys that there abound
lift up your head and let your soul shine thru
and a happier life Kristi will come to you

written for a true friend by james covington

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Fri 10/26/07 10:32 PM
James. YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Fri 10/26/07 10:40 PM
very awesome

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Fri 10/26/07 10:46 PM
ty very much

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Fri 10/26/07 10:50 PM
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Fri 10/26/07 10:51 PM
awwwww very well written Humm as you say yes it can
apply to alot of others shshshh hum just a bit hit
home shnoway bigsmile flowerforyou shsh heard it knocking on tmy door wanting in
humm

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Sat 10/27/07 12:33 AM
again ty

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Sat 10/27/07 12:35 AM
Nice piece shared!!flowerforyou flowerforyou happy