Topic: "Will I find the one?"
DCDude801's photo
Wed 10/31/07 10:15 PM
Just wrote this. Not my best but not bad for taking only 20 minutes. Keep in mind that I only write poems every once in a while. So try not to bash to hard.

I hope someday I can find the one.
That knows how to love me better than some.
I have been through heartache, and been broken down.
To this day I find it hard not to frown.
Will I ever find the one to be?
The one that will love me unconditionally.
I know what it’s like to have loved and lost.
Is the pain really worth letting my heart frost?
Can love be found in my life again.
Or am I stuck, just being the friend.
Where do I go and what do I do?
To find true love, and have a break through.
My heart is kind and my soul is strong.
Each day reassuring myself nothing is wrong.
You can beat me down but I’ll still get up.
Maybe next time I’ll think prenup.
You think you know them yet you hardly do.
Before you know it they take all you knew.
There has got to be someone who is better.
Someone as strong as I yet kind and tender.
Someday I’m sure I will find true love.
Someone equal to me like a well fit glove.


pkh's photo
Wed 10/31/07 10:20 PM
Hey that was really good and you will find that unconditional love...really enjoyed it hope to see more.flowerforyou

txangel's photo
Wed 10/31/07 10:20 PM
I think it shows your sensitive side and is well written!flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Wed 10/31/07 10:20 PM
I must say Wow,, very nice...

Welcome to JSH,,,, and yes one day she will see and feel your soul,,, flowerforyou

DCDude801's photo
Wed 10/31/07 10:23 PM
Thanks guys! You have lifted my spirits more than you can imagine.